writing

This week for writing, we published the writing we did last week. we are also planning to make a booklet for our writing.  This was lpg 13 I can write about the topic using a range of ideas and have added detail to some of them. My writing have not been printed so this is my writing

     Mystery in the city 1.8.17

“I wonder whats happening there,”Rebekah thought. As she turned around , a noisy crowd of people filled the city . Suddenly, the craziest image was right in front of her. A crowd of police’s with black gear with sheids,ropes,helmets and other equipments was middle of the city. They looked kinda like guard dogs growling people away.  She tried to rush on the slippery road and jump on a tall box so Rebekah can see what they were doing. All she could see was a girl standing  at the opposite side of her . It was like a confusing puzzle.The choices was to figure it out, or do what Rebekah was doing. Before she could think, they were all gone.

By Eunice Kim